Chapter 556 A full stomach and no chills (ask for a monthly pass!)
Or how to put it, they are the father and mother.
Yan's second thought is in sync with Yan Yushen's.
There is oil and water in the stomach, so it is cold!
He intends to use this as the title, to clarify the center and be clear at a glance.
But it’s not okay to write like this, you have to change it.
There is oil in the abdomen, and it is also frozen.
Still not working, make it shorter.
There is oil in the abdomen, and it is cold.
Words are not good.
Uh... Carrying the cold is too straightforward.
Full stomach oil, cold resistance!
Hiss! Still misses.
Yan's second child had a flash of inspiration at this time.
Got it!
Full belly and no chills!
Appropriate!
Yan Er Er is satisfied!
I stroked my train of thought and started writing.
First of all, highly affirm the significance of disaster relief, and the wise leadership of the palace.
After that, I will make some small suggestions on the current progress and methods of disaster relief.
Take warm clothes as an example. In fact, there is no need to issue new cotton-padded clothes. The size of old clothes is more comprehensive.
Yan Laoer learned before that in addition to cotton, Guanzhou people will also stuff poultry feathers and catkins into it. This is also a good idea. The big family is generous and kind, but sometimes, it is not necessary to do so well .
What I pursue are two points, fast and large quantity.
Insufficient medicinal materials, insufficient charcoal, and how to distribute rice can actually be grouped together.
Yan Lao Er reiterated his central theme here.
The common people have no oil in their stomachs, so they don't carry cold!
If you eat well, have plenty of oil and water, and you have two or two taels of fat on your body, you can make your cotton clothes thinner, and you don’t need to burn too much charcoal fire, and your body is hard to get sick, so you don’t need so many medicinal materials...
Don't worry about whether it's reasonable or not, anyway, Yan's second child is so rote.
Propose an idea without context, it is empty talk.
He is not that kind of person.
Yan Laoer brought it up, there must be a way.
Go into the mountains to pick meat...chisel ice to catch fish...
Go to Beirong!
Nothing is faster and more direct than Loot.
Bei Rong came to grab food, let's go to get meat, it's only fair that we come and go!
Yan Lao Er can write well now, what word count should I give, I can’t write too vernacular, forget it!
Don't look at him as a little cowardly in reality, he is full of enthusiasm on paper!
The king of mouth is not bragging!
One-pass analysis of pros and cons.
What weakens the enemy is to strengthen oneself!
Grab a bite of meat from Beirong's mouth, and add a little fat to our Guanzhou people.
We took it by surprise, they didn't expect it!
Just take advantage of the winter time, when the snow is covered, rush over and kill them by surprise!
If a Bei Rong dies this winter, there will be one less **** next fall.
eat their cattle and sheep, and let them have no meat to eat.
Steal their horses, leaving them without horses to ride.
Imagine it, the Bei Rong invaded the border with legs, and we would all be driven to death by them on horseback...
Yan Laoer wrote so excitedly that he almost filled a sheet of paper before realizing that he had written so much!
He hurriedly ended this paragraph, finally realizing the problem of word count.
I thought that there was still enough time, so I took it as a draft, wrote it first, and then changed it from the beginning after I finished it.
Thinking about it this way, Yan Laoer no longer has any psychological burden.
Directly write the government's division of the affected people.
Big mistake!
How absurd it is to determine people's mourning based on house damage!
After writing this sentence, Yan Laoer was stunned.
Come on, I wrote this?
So awesome!
This sentence is so amazing!
Keep it, keep it, must keep it!
After that, Yan Laoer is good at, the solution.
What's so difficult about this?
The order is wrong, should the house come first? Wrong, people-oriented!
People come first, first assess how miserable people are, what kind of assistance they need, and then build a house!
Or separate two departments, one is responsible for rescuers, the other is responsible for repairing houses, parallel management, cross-liaison...
Calculate the elderly and children at home, the wounded and sick, whether the labor force is lost...
In the case of sufficient supplies, relief can be provided without discrimination.
If the relief supplies are not enough, then the work should be implemented more carefully. How many cotton clothes are there at home, how much rice, grain and charcoal have been saved...
Finally, Yan Lao Er wrote that for sustainable development, it is best not to allow the victims to be rescued unilaterally, but also to allow them to do something within their ability, such as this household survey, which requires a lot of manpower, so they can be distributed.
Guanzhou is united as one, and under the correct leadership of the Wangfu, it will surely survive this cold disaster.
Winter goes to spring, and the warm sun blooms.
Yan Laoer finished his pen and looked at the last eight characters with satisfaction.
I was moved by myself: It’s so well written!
Yan Laoer put down his pen, picked up the previous one, and read it from beginning to end.
muttered to himself.
Zhen Nai performed super-level, there is not a single typo!
After reading it, he put it down and was about to grind the ink, preparing to retouch and revise a qualified answer sheet.
I don't want to suddenly reach out a hand from the side.
Picked up his draft!
Yan’s second child: …
First startled, then panicked!
Especially after seeing the back figure in the official uniform, holding his test paper and walking back to the seat in the middle of the hall, the panic reached the extreme.
Examiner...Master Zhifu!
Yan Xiangheng winked anxiously at his second uncle.
Follow me!
Yan Lao Er was stunned for a long time before he realized it, and stepped forward nervously, fortunately he did not forget to salute.
Huge people see very quickly.
Yan's second child came close, and he had already finished reading.
raised his eyes in surprise.
The examinee completed the previous two rounds in one go without any modification. He thought he would do the same this time.
Unexpectedly, there was an oolong, and this was actually a first draft.
Full text... vernacular continuous.
But chewing carefully is still an article... a work to watch.
Throw away the text and only look at the content.
Pragmatic one.
Render the second!
The emotions are full, and the viewers are moved by it, especially the main battle, which is hearty...
Registration and rating is fresh, thoughtful and practical.
There are a few places in the text that he particularly likes.
For example, the phrase "people-oriented!"
For example, the sentence "Determining people's mourning based on house damage, how absurd!"
is the last character, which is a bit vulgar.
It may also be the reason for the first draft, and the book came out of the excitement.
Pang Daren didn't want to waste the examinee's time.
He asked a few questions shallowly.
It’s about his carnivorous stomach keeping oil in his belly and not being afraid of the cold…
He knows how to dig ice to catch fish, so what is the point of going into the mountains to pick meat?
I heard that the village lived near the mountain, and the snow stopped into the mountain, and many wild animals were found frozen to death...
Pang Daren immediately and sensitively associated with Beirong.
Re-read the passage to go to Beirong again.
After a while, he asked about the household survey again.
After Yan's second son made an additional answer, the Pang Da people asked him to return to his seat.
After that, he remained motionless, staring at the empty table, his eyes flickering non-stop!
…
Yan Lao Er revised the answer sheet again.
Reluctantly deleted a lot of paragraphs.
Finally controlled the number of words on one answer sheet.
He is quite satisfied with this condensed version.
What made him dissatisfied was that he could not take the draft away, and all manuscripts with words in the examination room had to be handed in.
Yan's second child has a hunch that he may not be able to write such a peak article in his life... I don't know if he can write it silently when he returns home.
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The scumbag Yan Laoer completed the most important exam in his life, he really tried his best!
Everyone, don’t be too picky. The house is written to fit the characters as much as possible. It won’t be too good, and it won’t be that bad. There are still bright spots hahaha~(〃'▽'〃)~
(end of this chapter)